it def has potential.. my only suggestion is that there are a few times where nothing is happening like when the guy is trying to understand the speed racer joke.. or when he says "i'm a genius!" and i got kinda bored then, so what i would suggest is maybe for the speed racer one, have some music come in and then cut it off really quickly after a few seconds and have the guy say "oooooh, i get it... blah blah blah" or something to that effect.. other than that it's not bad tho.. keep the ideas flowing
At times it was def a little slow, such as after the night cut off the guy's head, but other than that it wasn't bad. when you had the "here i come to save the day!" i burst out laughing. good job
the story line was a little weak, however you seemed to use the sprites fairly well. Having buttons progress the scene is an ok choice, but it was hard to click on some of the text so make the hit area for those buttons larger. um.. that's about all the advice i have for ya... peace, keep up the good work
That will be recified E.p 3... Thanks for the advice, it's gonna help overall =D
heh, this has always been a classic game.. but how do you feed the pet!! i can't do it!!
everything was awsome except that alt and space sometimes opened the menu to close internet explorer.. i'd use ctr or something else.. just a thought.. amazing game though
it was alright
but why would they raid a prostitution house with a swat team? have a plot behind it like their pimp killed someone or something like that.. have background music.. and um.. zoom in scene when looking through windows shouldn't take so long.. um it has potential, just add soma these changes
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