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ok i suppose

it was ok.. needs sound.. but other than that it delivered what it promised

k

on your "again" button.. make the hit space all around the word again.. that way it's easier to hit and seems professional.. second.. smooth out the animation a little.. possibly draw a little better.. and then the intro song overlaps the second song.. so work on that.. other than that it's not too bad.. especially for a trial flash

ok i guess

but VERY predictable

k

alrighty.. first off.. have a dif music start off.. something not so hard and then have the linkin park kick in when the fighting starts.. now.. you really need to work on your drawings.. try to move from stick people or if you do use stick people try for the xiao xiao quality fighting because otherwise it's not gonna get so far.. I liked the plot tho. I think it could be a very good little series if you up the animation a little.. keep up the good work

hey

i'm not going to penalize you on your thoughts although i support our troups in Iraq.. but instead i'm going to try to help you present your message.. have the text stay up longer.. you can't read anything more than the first sentence on every quote except the last.. if you really want your viewers to see what you're saying you should have those quotes stay up longer with the pictures so that the viewers are not concentrating on trying to read the really fast text and instead are reading the quotes and then applying them to the pictures.. other than that it was fairly well done

James-Ball responds:

ok im working on that now thanx

not bad

the filesize was a little big for such a short film..although i do have cable so it wasn't a huge problem.. but try to cut it down.. animation wasn't bad and the sounds seemed to sync up pretty well so good job

ok

your annimation needs to be more fluid.. try a higher frame rate and less movement between frames.. sound was pretty good.. keep up the good work

decent

not bad, i liked how you used the sounds from various movies.. the braveheart speech was a little long for nothing to go on.. you should have camera angle changes... or at least have the main person walking back and forth. however, if you're ever going to want to get a high grade then you're going to have to learn how to animate.. try flashkit.com they have all sorts of tutorials. if you can get annimation down then you'll be in good shape

nice

the animation was nice.. it flowed pretty well. I mean sure it had very little plot, but the animation is the hard part i think.. keep it up!! i look forward to seeing more from you!

awsome

your animation skills are awsome! keep up the good work and make something else! don't listen to anyone who voted anything less than a three because if this had some sound then it would be great.. i think a lot of the people just blammed it on their first impression where the stick figuers are.. but it's a great cartoon.. keep up the good work!

"we'll decide this one through a extreme mental challenge, where the very essence of our knowledge will be tested and only the superior intelectual will prosper.... so.... heads or tails?" (boredom is only the beginning)

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