it def has potential.. my only suggestion is that there are a few times where nothing is happening like when the guy is trying to understand the speed racer joke.. or when he says "i'm a genius!" and i got kinda bored then, so what i would suggest is maybe for the speed racer one, have some music come in and then cut it off really quickly after a few seconds and have the guy say "oooooh, i get it... blah blah blah" or something to that effect.. other than that it's not bad tho.. keep the ideas flowing
At times it was def a little slow, such as after the night cut off the guy's head, but other than that it wasn't bad. when you had the "here i come to save the day!" i burst out laughing. good job
the story line was a little weak, however you seemed to use the sprites fairly well. Having buttons progress the scene is an ok choice, but it was hard to click on some of the text so make the hit area for those buttons larger. um.. that's about all the advice i have for ya... peace, keep up the good work
That will be recified E.p 3... Thanks for the advice, it's gonna help overall =D
i'm glad to see something that was banned on Xbox.com do so well here.. that is why Newgrounds is so great! excelent job my friend.. keep up the good work!
good job my friend, suggestions:
first off some sound effects would have been good when the music wasn't there, nice choice of music though. the animation in some parts was great like when he smashed his head into the cement. At other times like the part where they are both punching it could use some work. you could tell that it was just a loop and it was a little choppy. otherwise good plot as far as i can tell and great drawings.. keep up the good work! i look forward to seeing it
alright.. you need animation.. and you need a background sound that goes with your movie.. that song didn't really go with your movie.. although i'm impressed that you had one actually. cause without sound i wouldn't have been able to watch it all...but again.. animation will help you a ton, keep up the good work
this didn't ruin anything
this didn't expose the plot.. it was just pointless.
it was alright.. work on the animation, add sound!! (i can't tell you how important sound is to a movie) and not just sound effects like a cricket chirp.. but background sound too.. it's all essential! k, good luck in the future.. look forward to seeing more from you
i wanted to figuer out how to draw some anime girls and i got that.. plus a whole lot of laughs.. over all very good.. i think it was good that it didn't fly through everything although there were a few pauses which could be pulled out.. and the opening scene was kinda weird.. but over all great flash and i look forward to seeing more from you
awsome job man
awsome job man.. your animation is really good and only needs a lil more improvement.. the only suggestion i have for you is have background music while the cartoon is going on..nothing strange tho, it has to fit the cartoon. if you did that, this movie would be absolutly amazing keep up the good work.. i can't wait to see more from you
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